After re-reading chapter one, I've decided that Kaito thinks Shinichi and Saguru are already interested in each other since they argue like an old married couple, which is why he hasn't noticed that they're interested in him. Fortunately for all of them, Shinichi's had a stroke of brilliance. Indeed, whoever said they had to fight over who gets Kaito? That kiss was so much more than I'd hoped for, totally pornographic and completely wiping away any doubts Saguru could have had about whether he could be interested in Shinichi. Very well done, love Shinichi's reasoning and explanations. Also loved that this chapter was from Saguru's point of view as it really expanded our understanding of the characters.
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