Mayonaka - Chapter 04, Part 1

[koorii]

Fandom: Detective Conan/Magic Kaito
Pairing: KaiShin
Rating: T
Warnings: Kaito Pranks galore. 'Nuff said.
Genre: Humor/Angst/Drama
Words: 9611


( You're Always On My Mind )

Part 2

Comments

[mizukithepanda.livejournal.com]

I definitely like this story, though I've read others (in other fandoms) that use the same premise. I'm loving how you paint Kaito and Shinichi - they've grown, but they're still in character for the situations they've had to endure. One little nitpick I have is when you said Shinichi's name means "one truth". That's incorrect. His name is spelled "新一" which means "new one" rather than "true one" (眞一). But, other than that? I like it. Watching Kaito flail and fumble trying to live the past three years over again is greatly amusing.