Date: 2009-09-23 03:15 am (UTC)
I definitely like this story, though I've read others (in other fandoms) that use the same premise. I'm loving how you paint Kaito and Shinichi - they've grown, but they're still in character for the situations they've had to endure. One little nitpick I have is when you said Shinichi's name means "one truth". That's incorrect. His name is spelled "新一" which means "new one" rather than "true one" (眞一). But, other than that? I like it. Watching Kaito flail and fumble trying to live the past three years over again is greatly amusing.
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